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incarnated poetry

Postby Agnes » Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:03 am

http://deeperstory.com/incarnated-poetry/

"There are no extra words in a poem and there are no extra events in our life."



That sentence would look better with a comma after "poem"....methinks. 8)
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Re: incarnated poetry

Postby DougH » Sun Mar 27, 2016 7:05 pm

How can "life" be singular? --- lifetime for syntax, but the thought probably should be

"There are no extra word in a poem, and there are no extra events in a life."
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