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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:34 pm

Join me in the ocean river.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Jan 23, 2010 7:20 pm

This is the smallest moment,
The gateway to becoming.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Jan 23, 2010 7:31 pm

wondering
How
you are
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:56 am

No matter how insignificant I may be,
I am Supposed to help you. I will.

There are brooks and there are rivers.
There are ways to learn by the words
that people speak yet there are also
ways to learn by the subtle nuances
of the unspoken. We can tune-in more
to this in everday life and be wiser, to
improve how we love by learning
from those closest and furthest from us.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:58 pm

We choose how we feel,
We can also choose to be
Powerless to how we feel
And what we think about.

We choose how we feel and what we think about.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:06 pm

Dew absorbs into plants with the fog of dawn.
I meditate on the concept of what I can do,
Today. (pollen listens to the four elements entangle)
My freind, Flora, reminds me of unwritten poetry.
Exist-- in, "Gratitude instead of pain." This heroic
Woman is healing. She finds smiles inside herself
When she weeps; she can help people today.
It is warmer here, dew joins dew on a leaf and drips,
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:57 pm

Dew absorbs into plants with the fog of dawn.
I meditate on the concept of what I can do,
Today. (pollen listens to the four elements entangle)
My freind, Flora, reminds me of unwritten poetry.
Exist-- in, "Gratitude instead of pain." This heroic
Woman is healing. She finds smiles inside herself
When she weeps; she can help people today.
It is warmer here, dew joins dew on a leaf and drips,
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you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:24 pm

Flow


be aware
of your
every breath
and you will
not be stressed
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Fri Jan 29, 2010 7:28 am

She's brown and beautiful.
Her movement weeps. Sophia,
Stares into my eyes and breathes.
There are stories in her eyes, time
inside her eyes. Air from her lungs quiets
on my eyelashes. The whisper morning warms.

She turns around and looks out the window. Sophia
lost her best friend. With mourning hope she looks for
her, knowing it will never be the same. I talk to her and I
wonder if this horse can understand me. I can feel her loss
and it is in our eyes and breath that we understand eachother.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby Cat Sith » Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:30 pm

Happy Birthday Freewriter. :smt038

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:16 am

Listen to your soul.

Go where the love is and where it lasts.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:42 am

She's brown and beautiful.
Her movement weeps. Sophia,
breathes on me and stares at herself
through my eyes. There are stories
in her seye, time inside her eyes.
Air from her lungs quiets-- on my
eyelashes. Thoughts whisper in

pauses. Sophia turns 180 degrees
her chin raises then falls. Her companion,
still alive, will not breathe with her again.
The one she grew from a girl to a woman
with, her soothing spasm and hero.
She sleeps outside, reaching for more pain
in the coldest Florida hours, alone. With
mourning hope she looks for the one that gave
her all her love, as lake water becomes river.

We share a carrot. For half a moment we forget.
I talk to her in a language the moment created.
I wonder how deep this horse feels and if she
can - understand words and compassionate silence.
It is by existing with our spirit and in the music of breath
that we understand when the beauty of before pours - away.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Jan 31, 2010 10:21 am

Hermana, no es tu sangre con mi sangre?
Nuestra sangre dentro de nuestro corazón está conectado.
Ser real conmigo, no te temo o sin compasión.
¿Por qué? ¿Por qué perjudicar a nuestra conexión dada por Dios
(sí lo es) en que podemos ayudarnos unos a otros
y ser amable con este aguacero difícil y hermoso de la vida.
Soy un alma profunda y sublime con mucho que compartir.
Escríbeme, llego a entender por qué, mi corazón susurra.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:31 pm

Visceral Garden
I was submerged in her inner scars. Her blood did not know love. Still,
Her loveless blood beats on walls of veins without erosion. She sings,
"It's going to be alright," she does not believe it. Her pain quakes,
It tears me apart and splits me like the earth then sews me back
Together with stitches that dissolve into woman art, now I know
Complete art. I bleed inside myself, I weep and it feels incredible.

In the unspoken of the song the echoes take shape as water does.
Her agony trembles in the scintilla of her voice and separates through my
head on my mouth, ears, nose, eyes, and skin it eneters my invisible and takes
Refuge. This chanteuse, looks at me, without sound, I mouth "Go into
Me." She pauses, her neck dances to the lacuna. A painful hope softens.
Singing stopped, yet when she walked, blinked, and breathed, it was music.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:06 pm

A woman sets a man free
in a way that nothing else can.
A man understands this
when she shares her
sacred nature.

Those that perceive flaws
are clothed with flaws.
Come to nakedness
without senses
and experience
the spirit.

Right now, a woman
dances with a smile.
Love the present, with style.
Woman is a gift to man,
a gift from God.
Everything here has a mother.
There is woman
inside everything.
Woman is nature.
Nature is without flaws.
A storm is not wrong,
a tree grows without mistake,
and water is inside the
soul of a woman.
Can you feel it?
Dance with her water.

A woman gives, to be whole.
We all came from a woman.
We can all be closer to her.
Understand. Embrace her.
Comfort. Accept her.
Yes, help her.
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