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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:48 pm

For Life

We swim until we cannot find the end.
All we do is dance and look into eachothers
eyes and feel it all. Our silence enlightens
peace & bliss in a smile that is all-powerful,
we become totally precious. We create
the most sensitive storms and undefine every word,
in sunshine & spheres with abandoned abyss',
we discover the peace in absolute oneness.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:28 am

Music Inside a Seed

We enter nature's sap,
Completely audacious,
We divide and sojourn
To all the forests
We can imagine anywhere
All at once, naked,
To the core. There exists
A mother within us that
Looks into the tenderness
Of life, and receives
All the water and light.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:54 pm

Opening our Eyes

Ill give you all my love
all the time, we soothe
wherever we are, dancing
in eachothers closed eyes.
Moss grows and ice melts,
we kiss. We eat rice and drink
tea in Hawaii, ingratiated in storm

music. We hold hands at waterfalls
and listen to our heart sing and smile.
With our soul, we stand up and dance,
giving all our love to this kiss.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Feb 10, 2013 3:42 pm

With moon trembles, water dances
and shines, each drop being broken
and found - together. There is a music
beyond sound and silence
and we illuminate in the oneness.
In a gentleness that only the soul can feel,
we find eyes in each drop of water,
tenderness in every broken sand.
We slow down and listen to stories
and feel souls heal, because, simply, we listen.
We find compassion for polluted air
and water as it hopes and dances,
like a child, no matter what has happened.
We tremble with sun and moon,
with water and air inside (our body).
We tremble because of the tenderness,
that comes from each moment that life has broken
us down, and brought us back - together.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:32 am

Dear You,

Hope you're having a graceful transition into spring. Every little gratitude.


I need to be honest, just want to be sure that the (precious) vibes are good between us. It seems that when I'm talking to you I am bothering you, or that you don't want to help me on my journey to heal the sick, and those in need. But maybe I am reading it wrong, also sometimes I hear sub-conscious things. So again, I want to apologize if there's anything I've done to offend you or set a posture towards me that is not love.
With all my heart and soul, I just want to help people, I can hear the suffering of the world, or see it in eyes, hear it. I had a lot of problems with my family life
growing up, with a single mother & I was on my own at 14 years old, left to take care of myself. Went through a lot. I've had to teach my self a lot. The stories could bring down walls.
However it goes, it will be the way nature exists. There's a speechlessness that transcends words and I send you this.
So my teacher, my friend, my uncle, my brother, I ask for your compassion, for I make many mistakes, yet I humble myself to you, know that, respect your wishes, I want to honor you.
I want to clear the stagnations between us, these moments, they're precious, and in my heart I hope that you will support my journey to help others, holistic healing, holistic, whole, kindness of soul.
It will only help us to share love and consciousness, compassion, in the absolute.


Love,

L.A
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Fri Feb 22, 2013 12:06 pm

I whisper, "It's all in the eyes, our energy, the possibilities."
We receive unconditional and give harmony with our smile;
drifting into - eyes - feel. She makes music & soothes
all the shelter in this moment. In her soul, she finds peace.
Moments later she feels the glory of her whole life,
the grace of how she made it to now, all the hope that kept her alive.
In your mothers womb. Her thoughts helped make you, every feeling,
every bite, every breath, the power of subtleties in beauty embraced.
How did you get to now? the truth is undeniable. Able to love
more because we feel God more. We wake up and discover
what would have taken us 900 years of life to find, now,
we illuminate in consciousness, the timeless oneness.
We jump into cold lakes amongst millions' of mosquitoes,
under water, we rise and live more , dancing with water in air.
We forget annoyances or impatience and tune into the sacred.
With wild fearless all-love music, and a writer's nature of eternal metaphor,
the images of family throughout time all your favorites,
the peace in weather, the rest in sunshine, the hunger, the necessary.
Mistakes are born and become beautiful children, helping life forever
because of the power of real love. The power of a man or woman.
The compassion & forgiveness, the bow to boundless unprecedent surrender,
we find peace until we find consciousness, the rides in
nature and now never will be - again, so here it is, here you
are with all your heart. We ride single rafts with tequila and
limeade, or as children with children entranced in the safe water
of childhood. A new moment a new thought in a bigger moment, we
find the heartbeat of all New York City; or Beijing; or all of South America,
Arabia, Russia, India, Italia, Africa, the smallest dew sinking into roaring life.
We travel into the smallest moment into the corest part of all
our soul, the only here, in the stuff that makes you cry tears of joy
because of the purity of love in one moment, yes, the breath, we live
more of this... ineffable beauty, the blessed opportunity,
of being alive and able to love, the silent glory
in eyes looking into eyes, forever speechless because of the infinite oneness.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Mar 16, 2013 3:36 pm

We've Made it This Far


Humans love to struggle,
we love to cry, love to smile,
love to shelter and survive.
We swim where there are no words,
only pure love in our eyes.

We all live after we die.
We all live immortal life.
God is merciful to everyone.
Any breath can be perfect.
There is no hell, only the illusion of it.

Unconditionally God loves, God forgives,
God understands. And we can all find peace
when we seek and find the love in God's eyes.

God is infinitely more than life
more than death more than light.
As humans we are infinitely beautiful,
yes, it's true. We are limited next to
other beings, in other universes and galaxies;
other ways, with more conscious brains.
Yet, through it all, there is only one God,
and God loves you. Through it all.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sun Mar 24, 2013 9:07 am

I'm so sad about what is happening to the Pacific Ocean
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Postby olson29 » Sat Apr 06, 2013 8:45 pm

don't know : so sad
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:06 pm

piano on water
guitar in trees
flutes in volcanoes.
A mother opens her
eyes to a new day
and looks
into the eyes of
her baby.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Fri Apr 12, 2013 4:09 pm

I find therapy in writing poems
And deleting them before
anyone else can see them.

It's these unbearable times
That help me grow the most.
I welcome the struggles
As unprecedented suffering
In my soul pauses to feel
The broken gentleness
Of my whole. It's the invisible
Dissonance that rhymes when
Received, the ambiguous
That circles it's need.
you are poetry

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Postby Cat Sith » Sun Apr 14, 2013 12:06 pm

Did you delete some that were on this page? I thought there were more.

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Postby olson29 » Tue Apr 16, 2013 11:07 am

Man's greatest strength is found in the heart.
Every man falls and hurts and feels, yet,
The man with enough courage to walk
Through the pain in his heart and listen
without fear is capable of the greatest things.

True strength is beyond appearances,
Muscles, and cultures. Strength is found in
our ability to love with all our heart.

We feel the eyes of a baby boy
In his mothers womb, he grows
From her love. Into the eyes,
Of toddlers, teenagers, brothers, fathers,
Students, teachers, grandfathers, healers.
Through all the stages of a man's life,
A tenderness never leaves us. Again,
We feel the heart, we feel the eyes. We pause.

When we are humble enough to
Learn from our greatest teachers,
Women, we become more beautiful,
Balanced, and capable men.

A man honors men when he is brave enough
To feel his own heart without limitations.
A true gentleman is able to look into the
Eyes of vulnerable souls and give-receive
Love sensitively, gratefully, listening to
The deepest needs. We are all survivors.
We are all struggling in one way or another -
All of us - have a unique story about the
Infinite grace that made us who we are
Today. And what a difference it creates
When we are authentic, original, and
Brave enough to feel all the love in our heart.
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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Mon May 20, 2013 9:16 pm

Let us change. It's our time, now. We are safe.
We listen to the hope in our hearts, the
softness that has helped us receive our most
sacred moments. We breathe this breath
with all the love in our soul, all the love in our soul.
We surrender and receive a gentle smile - within,
a smile that can only be created from the strength
received in a life with suffering. We experience
the music of nature, all the beauty imaginable
as it connects with our soul. We walk the path
of what is between us and God and listen to love.
We pause; with our softer heart, we arrive.
you are poetry

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Re: Freewrites

Postby olson29 » Tue May 21, 2013 12:02 am

Naked; we float in oceans. We
listen to salt dance in life; in water.

Moon shines in pathways
as mist and virga sink into forms

of water singing songs deeper, higher,
closer. With the grace in our soul,

we find eachothers eyes and
listen to love until we cry.

As we fall, we stand, closer than possible,
our tears enter eachothers eyes.
you are poetry


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